Reviews for Your Hate Killed, Grandma
Camilleta chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
Nice. It's hard when all people want to remember is the good things about a person... -_-

Hey, I think I know the poem on your front page.

Kissing's a pleasure, fucking's a game

Guys get all the pleasure, girls get all the pain

He says he loves you, and you believe it's true

Until your belly starts to swell and he says hell with you

10 minutes of pleasure, 9 months of shame

3 days in hospital, a child without a name

The baby's a bastard, the mother's a whore

This never would have happened if the rubber hadn't tore

I liked your version better though lol.
A.J Scarlet chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Ah jeez really? Never give in like that... I'm referring to the 7th stanza. Never EVER give anyone that accuses like that the satisfaction of being right. Always prove them wrong and make look like a total jackass to get your revenge dude.