|Reviews for you're not too keen on miss just turned seventeen|
| itsallajoke chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
yo hommie :D
this is soo cool, i love it,
but i think you should use more semi colons, instead of dashes:D
| october lies chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
holy shit i really like this
especially the repetitive "we've got this kind of chemistry / you see".
this was really good.