Reviews for you're not too keen on miss just turned seventeen
itsallajoke chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
yo hommie :D

this is soo cool, i love it,

but i think you should use more semi colons, instead of dashes:D
october lies chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
holy shit i really like this

especially the repetitive "we've got this kind of chemistry / you see".

this was really good.