|Reviews for The Sleeping King|
| Icyfire4w5 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
1) "My hands moved with a life of their;"
(Um, I might be wrong, but I assume that you've intended to type "their own".)
2) I think that you've chosen the perfect POV for this story. (1st person POVHeightened horror)
3) Emily is so young, yet so cunning. Argh, her life has ended too soon.
| Narq chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
CREEPY! OMG, I had goosebumps crawling all over me! It was such a scary story... no, not scary, just... creepy? ;)