This was extremely well written! I loved it! I've always had a particular love for remakes of fairy tales...

Awesome!

I love it! This is amazing! In most of the Robin Hood stories I hear, Marian transitions so fakely, but this is awesome! And they have such a wonderful romance!

The line 'Will you two please just actually try to hurt each other?' made me laugh so hard!

Thanks for writing this!

So sweet!

Poor Much!

Yes! She told him!

No! You killed one of my favorite characters! No!

I loved the story! Keep up the good work! D D

Hey.

So I think I should read your story soon.

But, you know, I like reading revised versions of stories, not their crappy old ones.

You know what I mean.

So you better finish revising Becoming Robin Hood's Sweetheart (the title is fine. Seriously) within the next twenty-four hours, and then email it to me. Or DocX me on FP, okay?

You'd better. I want to revise it myself as well.

Don't work on it in Taiwan. I'll be doing work on it here, and giving you suggestions. Mkay?

This story was lovely! I really enjoyed it!

Personally, I love the title. It's awesome, to the point, inviting, and intriguing all at the same time. And just a personal side note, i never wanted the story to end and am dieing for a sequal. If you ever do write a sequal i will metaphorically worship at you metaphorical (and online) feet.

I just spent like...5 hours reading this story. _ It's 3:30 in the morning...And I'm tempted to start reading the sequel.

Seriously, this is one of the best Robin Hood stories I've heard. Though my only complaint is that at the beginning it went a little to fast for my likings.

The humor in it was also really brilliant. (I also laughed at pretty much every other part, only because I went into hysteria mode at around 2:00 AM.)

I love the characterization of Marian, she grows so much. She was so adorable in the first few chapters! And then she grew into a strong young woman. It was really well done.

This is definitely going on as one of my faves. XD

I'ma gonna try to get some sleep now. But I know what I'll be reading when I get up in the morning. :)

-Terms to look out for: "That's/It's sick," "wimps," "give me a break," "it'll be cool," "freaking out," "okay,"

-They didn't take Robin's sword away? Seriously? How stupid ARE these guards?

-I'd be interested in knowing how Marian knows how to ride bareback without a bridle. I mean, she obviously can't be sitting sidesaddle, and she would have never learned how to ride like we normal folk in this day and age do, because it just wasn't done back then.

-"The Merry Men's been trying..." It should be "The Merry Men've" if you want to keep the contraction, "The Merry Men have," if not.

-When Alan says "They are meant for each other," you might want to specify that he's talking to someone other than Marian and Robin. If he's not, it should be "You" not "They".

-Robin should have a cut on his arm, not a scar, unless he's a supernaturally fast healer, in which case he wouldn't need medical help at all.

-Shouldn't a wound that big need something over than washed? Like...bandages, at the least? Possibly stitches? Not that Marian should have to stitch him up, unless you want her to...

-Robin says he can control his birth. I'm pretty sure he can't.

-If they're so close to the camp, they would have heard it, especially since it's so busy. And didn't they just wander off into the woods AWAY from the camp?

-She didn't meet a lot of these people. How does she know their names?

-First line, your word "help" is the wrong tense. I don't know if you want it as "helps" or "helped".

-Robin loves her? Where did that come from? He's only met her a handful of times, and not for very long on any of those occasions! I'd like to see more of a buildup there; more liasons or something.

-Good job Marian for doubting him! I like the throwing of things and the very unenthusiastic part about being friends. Though the necklace breaking was a bit unrealistic; it would have to be EXTREMELY cheap to break at all, let alone shatter, even the settings. We won't even get into shattering diamonds.

-Wouldn't someone else in the castle hear all of this commotion? Especially coming from a lady's room?

-Robin acts like a womanizing bastard. I like it. Not because I'm masochistic or anything, but because it's accurate for the period. )

-"If I were you, I'd listen to your friend or else both of you WILL end up on the gallows." Not would.

-And now SHE loves HIM? Oh, come on!

-I could not get caught, not cannot. Your story is written in past tense.

-As touching as this whole scene of love confessions is, it's more cheesy than anything.

-I didn't see any words to look out for in this chapter! Good job!

-Terms to avoid: "guy," "weird," "like" as in "like him" (try "fancy" instead), "okay," "are you serious" (at least in the way Robin uses it), "dorky," "Random, much,"

-It seems strange that Robin's band refers to each other by full names (William Scarlet, Alan a Dale). Most people who read this will be somewhat familiar with the people and setting; other than introductions, illusions (such as just calling William Scarlet "Scarlet") will be enough.

-Uh, how old is Robin Hood? Because the more I see him, the more like a five-year-old he acts. Sorry, that came out really bitchy, but it's true.

-The sewing part should be blank "cloths" not blank "clothes."

-I like Marian's reaction to Robin killing William (which seemed somewhat lacking in emotion). It's completely natural for her to blame herself, and that was well-written. The part about Robin actually killing William could use some more detail, though; it's just over and done with so fast I was left going, "What?"

-So the Earl has proposed? But I thought they were already engaged!