I'm so sorry Avani! You poor girl...you are NOT a witch!

Hello :)
The first time I was introduced to your particular brand of writing was through In the Cookie Jar. I loved it. I loved how refreshing the main character was. She was quirky, funny, slightly immature, and she is a pick-pocket. Enough said.
So I dove into this story with high expectations. I really liked the premise of the story. A teenage psychic meeting the guy of her dreams. Sure why not.

Unfortunately, that's where it ends. Avani, as the main protagonist doesn't have enough of a presence to carry this story through. I feel like she is a blank slate and the only thing that seems to define her is her obsession with the guy from her visions. Granted that IS what this story is about, but I expected her to have more deeper problems like the death of her father. Why isn't the mother affected by that at all? Both of them seems to just shrug it off. Maybe if you add in something about how she changed or how his death affected her, it would give the character some depth. Why doesn't she research more about her power? How exactly does it work? Anybody else in their family besides the mother with any brand of supernatural powers? And most importantly, why? Everything happens for a reason right? So why her?

Darren. Typical boy god of the school. He comes across as whiny, dispassionate and flat. His POV seems forced and choppy.

All in all, a pretty good premise, a nice solid idea but the delivery and characters definitely have room for improvement as they all seem two dimensional.

This is just my opinion on what I felt when reading this in comparison to your other stories. However, I do look forward to see how the story goes.

I really love this story! I find it's soo interesting :) I know it's been a while since you've updated, but I hope you do anyways Totally faving, great job! :)

this has such great potential! i hope you update it sometime in the future :)

to answer your question about vampire or werewolves. i'd have to say werewolf, now note im not saying anything about Robert Pattinson or Taylor lautner, just vampires of werewolf.

since they're both predatory monsters, i've got nothing to lose. it's just that i think werewolves are less awkward to be around because you dont have a huge age difference and i love dogs anyways. and you can actually go on dates with a werewolf! :)

review: in the first few chapter you kept on repeating the first line and it's kind of weird

go plus one!

How come you haven't updated this awesome story in 4 years? Are you at least planning on finishing it?

um, hi i just found your stories and well.. i really like it. can you finish it? please? ill love you forever. kk.. well.. bye bye..

The talked, they talked! They held a whole conversation and he walked her to her class! I like this story!

UPDATE WOMAN. Or I'll find you and kill you myself.

And... werewolves. More rugged and... hot. Literally. OH WHATEVER. Pleeeease update, I want to find out if Darren ever acquires a soul.

i love this more than i can type out right now! the fact tht she can see in the future is friggin cool itself an i really hope the darren loses the playboy attitude and starts feeling protective of avani . hate how he just shoves everything off life tht gr gr and avani stop being so obvious gal! i wonder wht her mom thinks of the date update soon!

Please, please, please, please update this story. I think it's pretty awesomely awesome XD xxx

So i'm reading these stories from a very interesting author, but it seems she's gone MIA for a while now. . . And my heart is breaking. I really really don't like the feeling of being left on a half cliff (seeing as most of the incomplete works haven't quite gotten to a climax yet) and i really really want to read more! :) so please update and i'll be waiting -

I'm in love with this story

i love this story as well :D

whoa i finished all your stories in one day (:

i really wish you would update all your stories because you and your stories are spectacular and i wish you all the best through your whole college experience :D