|Reviews for The Side of the Road|
| Redrosey18 chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
I hope you do a second chapter. It's sooooo cute! : D
| PervEcToy chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
No, I don't think you've failed in that account. I really didn't see it was coming, their first kiss. Because you know, Gabe actions just before the kiss seemed innocent enough.
| mousegirl05 chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Ah, I always feel somewhat flimsy when I have nothing 'helpful' to offer, and then I remember that every now and then, just hearing that something was wonderful is helpful enough.
Bottom line? I really liked this. I think it was great that we had Gabe being a food critic and that he liked Nathan's cooking. Obviously a match made in a kitchen. *laughs* Excuse the pun. I can't help it sometimes.
Anyway, I think that you achieved the WTF kiss. I couldn't stop laughing. It was great. And I liked the bit with huddling beneath the truck cover-and the over-talking girl with the pink phone. *laughs*
| Shjsj7732 chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
So cute! I love this!
| Wtf-Are-Scrambled-Eggs chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Nice! :) Checking out your other stories...
| Jaded Devil chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
So cute! I love cute little one-shots, because they're always easy to read in one sitting but full of such sugary moments as well. :)
| Alpharoyale chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
LOVE IT! I was a bit skeptical, wondering how you would finish the story in one chapter, but it worked out perfect! Also the bit about the gravy added a bit of humour at the end. I wish there was a sequel, hint hint (but if you don't I understand)
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT And wish there was more!
| SeaRabbits chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
Ok, first, commas are important. If the sentence doesn't read right, it loses momentum.. "A year as his boyfriend and I had to walk in on that before he ended it." I kept reading this as "his boyfriend and I," and I couldn't figure out why Nathan was with Randy's boyfriend, it lost me, until I clicked.
Second, Nathan and Gabe made me smile, and for some reason I thought Georgette was a man. *smacks herself in the head* ..
| Nika chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
This story was so nice. Out of 10 I give it a 9.5.
| Soraya Zeeva chapter 1 . 2/22/2009
lol. This was great. I liked it.
| chanilow chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
Thabks for a cheeky read!
| Kjersti chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
How sweet. Man, I wish it was that easy in real life... I loved this story. :)
| Cattails chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
That was a lot of fun Breaking down on the side of the road never looked so fun! Aw, and Gabe's awesome...he sounds very huggable. I like that twist in the end XD And the random kiss attack!
| nomy chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
wtf kiss?..i like this kiss more..~~!superb ending..i was like cheering for the kiss too!
| JtheChosen1 chapter 1 . 10/22/2008