Reviews for The Side of the Road |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you do a second chapter. It's sooooo cute! : D |
![]() ![]() No, I don't think you've failed in that account. I really didn't see it was coming, their first kiss. Because you know, Gabe actions just before the kiss seemed innocent enough. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, I always feel somewhat flimsy when I have nothing 'helpful' to offer, and then I remember that every now and then, just hearing that something was wonderful is helpful enough. Bottom line? I really liked this. I think it was great that we had Gabe being a food critic and that he liked Nathan's cooking. Obviously a match made in a kitchen. *laughs* Excuse the pun. I can't help it sometimes. Anyway, I think that you achieved the WTF kiss. I couldn't stop laughing. It was great. And I liked the bit with huddling beneath the truck cover-and the over-talking girl with the pink phone. *laughs* Cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute! I love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! :) Checking out your other stories... |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute! I love cute little one-shots, because they're always easy to read in one sitting but full of such sugary moments as well. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! I was a bit skeptical, wondering how you would finish the story in one chapter, but it worked out perfect! Also the bit about the gravy added a bit of humour at the end. I wish there was a sequel, hint hint (but if you don't I understand) LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT And wish there was more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, first, commas are important. If the sentence doesn't read right, it loses momentum.. "A year as his boyfriend and I had to walk in on that before he ended it." I kept reading this as "his boyfriend and I," and I couldn't figure out why Nathan was with Randy's boyfriend, it lost me, until I clicked. Second, Nathan and Gabe made me smile, and for some reason I thought Georgette was a man. *smacks herself in the head* .. |
![]() ![]() This story was so nice. Out of 10 I give it a 9.5. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. This was great. I liked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thabks for a cheeky read! |
![]() ![]() How sweet. Man, I wish it was that easy in real life... I loved this story. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a lot of fun Breaking down on the side of the road never looked so fun! Aw, and Gabe's awesome...he sounds very huggable. I like that twist in the end XD And the random kiss attack! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wtf kiss?..i like this kiss more..~~!superb ending..i was like cheering for the kiss too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome one-shot! |