really cute story. thanks for sharing!

Hahaa, sweet. Gotta love our big Damien!

Omg that was so cute. It was wonderful fluffy goodness. It was awesome like cheesecake (cheesecake is the most awesomest amazingest (see it even gets a triple superlative) food ever...and even know this story isn't food. it is comparable to cheesecake on the amazing scale) (i'm fairly certain at this point i'm rambling and not saying any of the stuff I intended to) Aiden and Damien (see their names even sound good together) running into Josh at the concert was awesome! I really liked this story (in case you didn't get that from the rambling about cheesecake) I totally want to buy a Damien. (OMG A STORE TO BUY PEOPLE THAT IS AWESOME IDEA! WE SHOULD MAKE ONE(one of the voices in my head just said that selling people is slavery...but we can ignore it. I think thats the stupid voice anyway)) OK REALLY SHUTTING UP NOW BEFORE I FREAK YOU OUT LOL

i really liked this what do you call it oneshot? :) anyway it was really sweet and im a little sad it ended there and we didnt get to see Damien in his fairy costume *pout*

Awe i love happy endings!

This story was really cute. :) I've read a lot of stories for this challenge, and this one is definitely one of my favorites.

~eternallily

I liked this little one-shot a lot. It fit well within the constraints of the challenge (I like when people repeat the challenge rules before the story; thanks for that), and it wasn't entirely predictable, which was nice. I do wish that we knew more about Aiden; for some reason I feel a little disconnected from his character. I don't know if it would work a little better in first person, but if you're bored you might try that.

I really liked Damien; I wanted to know more about him, too. What was his motivation? Did he like Aiden back in high school, or is this the first time he's really noticed him? Is he serious about a possible long-term thing? Does he know anything about Aiden except that he's Ian's cousin before he invites him along? Stuff like that.

I love how they sort of told off Josh; he sounds like a selfish prick, despite his cuddling and kissing prowess. The sex is all about satisfying his needs (bastard), and he seems more pissed that Aiden got a better spot in the concert than him more than anything else. What a prick.

Anyway, good job! Hope to see more...

cute!

I couldn't believe your first edit! I love this pair. The are so sweet together and so very hot even with just a kiss! I'm not good at constructive reviews so I'll just have to tell you that I really wish you would write more about this couple. Sorry about the shortness of my review. :(

Super cute story. Thank you! You really make me forget everything around me

I had a whole lot of fixed up errors... and then I accidentally clicked the review button again *pouts* But oh well.. the ones I remember: bend/bends band/bands, Ian was a family Ian was family... Anywho. Love it :D

Holy buckets! *laughs* That was just SO enjoyable! That Damien character is a riot. I LOVED the bit about the frilly tutu and killing with fluff. These are great characters and you did a good job working in the challenge stuff. Nothing really felt forced or out of place or there ‘because it was part of the challenge’; you know?

So that’s the good stuff. I noticed a couple of word choice oopses; both very common. The first was when they were talking backstage. Ian said ‘loose virginity’ in reference to why Josh jilted Aiden. The correct word is ‘lose’. ‘Loose’ refers to something that is not tight or something freed. The second was shortly after, during the discussion of Georgette’s first time ‘on summer brake’. You wanted ‘break’. ‘Brake’ is the term for a device that stops or slows a moving object, while ‘break’ indicates something broken (such as the continuity of work or school, resulting in a vacation). Those were the only two things that jumped out at me. Except those two little things, this was enjoyable and very funny. Cheers!

i like!

its really cute!

Hey,

this is really cute.

You should make this into a story.

I'd love to read more.

It seems like such an odd couple but it works.

:)

(took me ages, I know, but I'm finally going through the entries I didn't review and reviewing them) (reviewing it AGAIN when it comes to YOUR entry _ I SWEAR I feel like I already wrote a review for this) (actually, now that I think about it, I think I read this entry with my friend Daniel, and then we TALKED about it, and then later I thought I'd already reviewed it but in fact I'd only just TALKED about it with Danykins) (but I'm not sure) (but anyway)

It was a really really good entry. Reading it and realising that because of my stupidity I didn't get you to enter the other challenges kind of makes me realise my loss. Although Aiden's character isn't as developed as I wish it'd been (but that's mainly because it's a oneshot and I have this thing were I always wish oneshots were longer or had more chapters) but Damien is adorable, and the ending was so fluffy and feel-good you just felt like snuggling into it. Josh is an utter bee ay ess tee ay are dee, and I LOVED the bit where Damien talks to him. I was all 'HECK YEAH, TAKE THAT BIOTCH!' :D anyone who could dump their boyfriend/girlfriend for refusing to have sex with them is just...despicable. HOPE YOU GET AIDS AND DIE, JOSH!

No, no, I don't hate him that bad, really.

It was also really well-written and funny and fluffy and all the things I love in a fic.

I'm SO SO SO SO SO sorry I never reviewed this before. I feel SO bad. I hope one day you'll find it in your heart to forgive me :( although it was completely my fault. Trust me. And you're not the only one it happened too. I guess I shouldn't have organized this challenge, I'm too disorganized :S

Anyway, (VERY LATE) thanks for the entry and A THOUSAND TIMES SORRY.