|Reviews for to die for|
| Isca chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
OH MY GOD!
It's an INSTANT FAVOURITE! :D
The imagery of the person twirling to the music, was so beautiful!
The ending was so powerful, so vivid, so tragic, that I just couldn't review this fast enough :P
| Unknown Survivor chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
Nicely done. (:
| rust phoenix chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
I like this. It's exactly the right length, and the word choice is unique enough to make it stand out. The only change I can think of is to add a comma after "for" in the third line.
Great use of italics and parentheses.