I really like the entire story. I've been looking for something written like this for a while and couldn't find anything. It's also rally easy to relate to

Yay, I'm starting a new story of yours!

Pretty good so far.

Aw, that character was YOU? That's so sad! Now I'm angry at whoever did that to you. Then again, I'm not because if they hadn't, I wouldn't be reading this story thing.

By the way, Fearless is a song about love. I think for "After" you should have a song about how glad he is about being single. That's the only complaint I have about the playlist.

I like that song Never, never. It totally fits.

I also like all the Taylor Swift! me encanta

*Sigh* I thought this story would have a depressing ending. I'm so glad it didn't.

I think you could make it a lot better - you could add a whole bunch of description and other stuff. You could make this into a good story if you told about what she did and how he retaliated. THAT story would be realy long and realy good. I think.

if things were the same, he'd love her still. i hope they're not the same. she doesn't belong with him. he doesn't belong with her. things are therefore definitely not the same.

Hm, well this is a good start for the first chapter. I like the writing style you have going for this. Most stories like this written in first person come off as a bit awkward and cheesy but you pulled it off. Also, I like the way you described the main characters feelings. It really gave an insight as to who she is but at the same time not giving too much away. Nicely done.

-Dee, from the Review Marathon.

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you know what? you should even try making it into a story form with characters and all that. :o

and better in time is such a god song.

the last chapter i loved, that you are happy again. that's what i realize i went through these kind of emotions with "aiden" and ended like your last chapter with the guy you hate. not ed.

:]

now work on wolfheart.

if you're having this much trouble forgetting her, i think she has no reason at all to be afraid. and since you don't have the guts to show that smile...ya know...

you're frozen but she can't stop you? um...i think she did. sorry to burst your bubble of concietedness and cockiness but she stopped you all right.

hah! pyro! arsonist! i love this girl's tactics, but you have seriously got to get over her.

"you're tied together with a smile, but you're coming undone." poor kid.

"you did not hold me back anymore" is what you say. i hear this: "kiss me goodbye, i'm defying gravity, and you can't hold me down!" sound familiar?

"no right to come near me." then don't get mad at her. for the first time in your life, DON'T GET MAD AT HER! you've gotten over her, or so you say, so WHY ON EARTH ARE YOU STILL ANGRY?

stupid, get over her! get a new girl! she OBVIOUSLY got over you!

sorry. if you haven't noticed, i comment more on the story than anything else. and i yell at the characters. a lot. :)

yup. she hit her head. after what she put you through, she thinks she can be nice? wow. she has issues. and the main character wants her? "all that mattered was that you were here with me. rescuing me." i can't even believe him.