Reviews for Incarcerate
Goldriver Wildheart chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
I really liked this. It seems to have a very dark meaning behind it, but I like how its not 'emo dark'; meaning that it doesn't have a fake air of depression. You're a great poet, keep it up:D
She Who Screams His Name chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I really like this.

It's great, and I got chills reading it (the good kind of chills!).

Good job. :]
S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.G chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
Hauntingly good. I like that it had a hopeful ending.

Your style is good, and the only "critique" I can give (not really a critique, more advice) is that the punctuation you did use was well placed, and if you were to use more of it and not capitalize all the letters at the beginning, I think it would put more emphasis on each line. But of course, that's only me talking, it's definitely not wrong to not use punctuation. :)

Overall, I enjoyed this. Kudos.
Unique1952 chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
The imagery here is amazing. I love your choice of words here, nice work.
Isca chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
"I saw the blood and tears

Run down your face

I was never alone."

Great ending! I liked the imagery of the cold room, someone crying, etc. It was really vivid and emotional! :)