Reviews for A Suitable Lover
Midnights Scream chapter 4 . 11/9/2008
Patrick shouldn't be so nosey and I am interested in what Skip did that's such a problem. Poor guy really is the unsuitable lover though. It's sad to realize that the poor guy
Midnights Scream chapter 3 . 11/8/2008
Poor Skip being thought of as such a jerk when really he didn't know a thing. Great job. And sorry for calling Skip Silas in a review. I read that name in an earlier story and I'm extremely tired right now and mixed names. Great job!
Midnights Scream chapter 2 . 11/8/2008
lol. Silas is amazing. *snicker* I like the part at the end when he talks about the unsuitable . it makes sense how he's putting it. :) great job.
Midnights Scream chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
wow. That's an interesting way to begin a story. They're both emotional screwed. Both opposite ends of the spectrum of emotional retardedness. great job though. I like it!
khavle chapter 8 . 11/3/2008
New reader _

I love the story. I like Skip. He is so confused it is like watching a lost puppy. I just want to pick him up and pat him on his head :D I don't think he would be very happy though.

I hope he wouldn't ask Marcus out though. I don't like Marcus, he is so arrogant it's just annoying.
kiki chapter 4 . 10/6/2008
please update! i wanted to know too!
auel chapter 3 . 10/1/2008

I'm pretty new to fictionpress, and I must say that I actually registered this account just to put you on author alert! P

But I love the style and flow of your story, I'm sorry that I can't go into a detailed analysis of your story right now, but I will say that it is really a interesting read and the storyline just draws me in and leaves me asking for more.

Do keep up the updates! ]
LaylaLivesLoosely chapter 3 . 9/29/2008
I really, really enjoyed reading this. Your characters are vivid and likeable, and I cant wait to read more and see what will happen!
Kimiyosuke chapter 2 . 9/27/2008
Love the story! update! I'm your fiest reviewer, this is so awesome. Since I ONLY read yaoi (slash) stories, and theres mostly straight. So its very hard to find a good slash story like yours. So I thought that you could try my story! Its the one literally right before yours. I'm In Love With A Rockstar is the title. Its really good, you should try it immediately!
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