awe., oh my God,

i wish Ocean would just tell her he loved her too!

don't stop writing!

I am so pissed off. How DARE you end it right there! I was all content on just reading on but, NO it just had to stop right there! Keep wirting chica. You got me totally hooked, as you can tell. And yes i do plan on getting totally pissed everytime it takes you forever. I must know what happens! Being a hopeless romantic ain't that easy ,you know? Anyway please hurry! And no i am not a lunatic just in case you were wondering. I just love stories like this. Keep writing. I may not know you but i have faith in your and dont worry about any of my constructive critisism in future chapters. Just trying to help. lol

jus found this story

totally love it!

plz update soon )

-Kat

Hello there!

So far, I really love this story. It never got boring. And, well, I don't know what to add. Should I shower you with compliments? I could, I guess. But I'll just sum it up by saying I really had a great time reading this, and I will be eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Thanks forsharing this sotry with us, and keep up with the good work. ]

this story is amazing. you're insanly good. seriously. kepp on writingg! :D ahhmaazing (:

YAYY!

You're back! Looks like you've been updating again for a while now, but my stupid email acount's gone weird so I havent been getting alerts :(

But randomly the other day this story popped into my head and I thought I'd re-read it (cuz I love it that much :D) anyway, then I realised there were new chapters and well... WAHHO :)

OMG...SHE TOLD HIM SHE LOVED HIM AND HE LAUGHED! haahaa, I honestly did'nt know if either Terra or Ocean would ever admit it because quite frankly they both seem pretty reluctant but finally Terra confessed, sure Ocean laughed but I know he loves her too (doesnt he? :O)

Anyway, I LOVE THIS STORY, always have always will (first story I ever read on fp..aw :))

I'm too excited for the next update! :)

Jade

xoxo

Wow. It seems like Moses is softening up. That was quite close to a heart to heart, I believe. :) Sigh, I feel a bit bad for Terra though. Ocean's being complicated and Rose is just in the way. Once we get past that though, we've got some really good stuff coming up. :D Kudos for this chapter.

-Flute.

Update as soon as possible if at all possible!

Alfred certainly is amusing, I loved his reaction, lol. He's definitely one of those interesting characters. Thanks for updating, I'm looking forward to reading more!

Bah. Alfred. He gets on my bad side.

O

Wonderful Update as always

Yes, becauser he is not the least bit creepy...

AMong the Hidden

I love her asttitude towards her teacher. It makes me wish that icould do that to a number of teachers at my school..

You got some great talent!

Among the hidden

Around and around in circles they go. When they stop no one knows. haha. Life just has to be complicated doesn't it? Glad you updated!

i dont think terra should cuss so much.. i like it better when the boy is the more dirty mouthed one for some reason :/

Rwoar!

That was amazing! Wowyy