HE IS AN ASSHOLE.

oh my gosh! I was absolutely glad that you posted another chapter! I really love this story.

I havent really seen any grammar mistakes and i like how you were able to describe what terra was feeling when she was looking back to what had happened in her past. Its nice to see another side of ocean and show that he cares. They obviously love each other! i wass soo happy when terra finally admitted it to him even though she didnt intend to and ocean's reaction was funny. I think it was better than him not saying anything and keeping the situation absolutely awkward. Although, i wouldve loved it if he also said 'i love you' back but i think the way you ended it was much better. Well, juz keep writing and good luck on your test! :)

Hey! I'm hoping that your SAT went better than mine :/ Anyways, I'm taking the Math 2 subject test in November, so hopefully I'll do better than when I took it this summer. Good luck on your December SAT 2s! Okay, I found a few minor "in need of a comma" places, but they're not really noticeable- just nitpicky stuff. However, one thing that kind of bothered me was how Terra kept saying "Where's he?" After the first time, she would probably start to enunciate and say "where IS he?" (with especial influence on the 'IS'). People talk slower and enunciate more when they're in shock/denial. Just a suggestion from a fellow writer :) Anyways, I love Ocean and Terra. They're so cute! Loved the chapter! Wish that you'd update more frequently, but, well, I can understand the grind.

...nice Ocean. Be evasive.

GET TOGETHER ALREADY.

Oh my goodness ... I absolutely terrifically adore this story. When my friend recommended it to me i didn't expect it to be this good. You have really really really good grammar, spelling, syntax, etc and you an actually WRITE a story not just tell one.. I love Ocean and Terra they are so sweet. Pretty much just pulled an all nighter to finish this, but I don't care. The only criticism I would have to make is that at times I feel like you left out parts of the story inbetween chapters so it was harder to catch onto what was going on for a while..but thats ok if its your style...KEEP GOIN! ITS AWESOME

I have litterally fallen in love with this story(: Please update soon!

HI! I really, really liked this chapter. As someone who knows how losing a dad feels firsthand, I can definitely say that you were able to hit the right emotions. I felt something that I haven't felt in a long time...and I wish that someone had been there for me like Ocean was for Terra. Oh, well, I guess that I can always dream, right? XD Good job- and every day of those 3 or so months was definitely worth it, because this was obviously a super hard chapter to write; I know that I definitely couldn't do it. Nice pot build up; I kind of think that you are making Rose too simple of a character (i.e. the villain who's just plain evil); you may want to give her a few nice characteristics if you can work that in. Other than that, LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Can't wait for the next chapter!

SATs were okay; I took the subject tests in June, so I'm taking the real SAT for the second time this October. I seriously don't know if I can handle all of this awful college stuff. UGH. Way too much work. Good luck!

I absolutely love this story!

very heartfelt

ahh ha! started reading this a few days ago and i couldent stop! fantastic story!

Matt is so freaking cute, and rose is a strait bi*ch in a bad way! calvin is sweet and ocean... well he's ocean...lol i love tarras personality !

anywho update asap!

Update soon!

The end had me all teary eyed! I love this story! Write more ASAP!

Aw! That was a heavy chapter, but I really liked it! I felt so sad reading the dream at the end, and I could feel Terra's anguish! I love how Ocean there every time she needs him though, and she doesn't even realize it. Well maybe she does, but consciously she doesn't, not yet anyway. I'm really excited for more of this story! I hope you get around to updating soon, but I completely understand, life gets in the way. So good luck writing and with life and everything! LOVE THE STORY AND CHAPTER! UPDATE SOON!

Love,

MintCcIceCream

hey! nice to see u back ! nice chapter... well done

hope to see more soon