Holy CRAP! wowowowow! where did your brain come up with this! Totally unexpected!

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! HOLY CRAP! i love this story and then you post two of the craziest chapters! That was sooo much.. god no wonder the poor girl couldn't think, i couldn't either! So it sucks cause i love Scott, i know what she means if she had met him and ocean wasn't around.. I LOVE HIM! he is sooo sweet and cute. I almost want her with him. lol.. But when i read the end of this chapter i wanted her with ocean more. Everything he said was so freaking cute and amazing. So i feel so bad for her, and while i totally get that she feels bad for all the things she said to her mom, in a way i think she still has a right to be upset.. i mean i know her mom was trying to protect her.. But she had to know that one day all this would come out and it would kill her daughter, especially since her mom has been lying.. I think she should have been truthful, espeically about the relationship with scott's dad. He seems like a good man. It would be great if they could all get a long as a family.. Hopefully Rose and her can be like sister and get over everything. Anyways, can't believe this is almost over! :( makes me sad. Do you have another story in mind? or are you going to take a break? Well can't wait for the update to see how everything goes! great job, and sooo Glad you are back! i never forgot about this story!

When are you going to post chapter 31

Please update soon.

Thank you so much for writing. I truly appreciate your wonderful story and the honest effort you've obviously put into it. Please keep writing!

Oh. My. God. I'm absolutely speechless. I have very very few coherent thoughts right now. Other than I knew Ocean wouldn't betray Terra like that! And OCEAN TO THE RESCUE! I was so hoping he would come to the rescue heehee :) And omg they are so cute together! :)

But what I don't understand is this: Terra's father had an affair with Rose's mother, and they died together? And then Terra's mom turns around and hooks up with Rose's father? And Mercedes is pissed because of this? Or the fact that Terra lied that her father died?

Thank you for updating! Update soon :)

PS- Does this mean the story is almost over? :(

Coming from a recovering anorexic: the anorexia jab in chapter four wasn't cool. Screw you.

Or maybe, because you continued (Yay) I'll just continue with my review using Chapter 30.

Still Chapter 29:
22) Heyyyy. What. Is. Happening.
23) GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! SCOTT LOVE! FORGET WHAT I SAID. He likes her! YAY
24) It electrified me too.
25) Whaaa... why? Nawww. They're cute, they joke.
26) Did she really? How funny. But yeah, she kind of does love Ocean. The whole fulcrum of the story really.
27) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA NO! WHAT IS GOING ON? INCEPTION INCEPTION TWIST TWIST! Wait, who's Monroe again? Scott and Rose's dad, yeah? WHAT IS GOING ON?
28) Oh no... Scott knew and didn't tell. Goodness, how you love to torture Terra ;)

Oh Uni! How lovely, I hope it's going well. No, I totally get why you would be swamped. It's okay, I don't really mind - I just tease. I hope that you find this live reviewing quite fun. It went very cartoonish, monosyllabic and - frankly - a little garbled.

Now... for Chapter 30. (Dun dun dun)

1) Cool. Clarified the relationship. Monroe Scott's dad. I was right. Teehee.
2) ADULTERERS! I love it.
3) It's a bit like a Spanish telenovela!
4) Please don't let him be her brother... That would be weird. And very Star Wars.
4) Newwwww! What is this mysterious everything?
5) What on earth is going on? I confuzzled.
6) Is she going to take some pills? I feel that a girl in her state right now , may just totally go off her rocker - suicidal crazy. Poor girl.
7) I really want her to stay on the pavement. How funny would that be? Do you think any one can actually roast on a pavement? (Okay, that's a really weird thought, but I've only had 5 hours sleep)
8) AHA! I was right! No Terra!
9) How does she know he's a redhead?
10) WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAA?
11) OCEAN!
*my heart will go ooooooon* (Oh my gosh, that's funny because he's an 'Ocean')
12) Oh my gosh. I'm panting slightly. Yay, Ocean I love is back. Go him. Heavy breathing from me.
13) 'If you'd died, I'd have a reason' Oh. My. Word.
14) TWIST TWIST TWIST TWIST TWIST WHAT IS HAPPENING?
15) On a sidenote: Yay, he didn't tell Rose. OH MY GOSH. ROSE - Titanic! Where's the Jack? Also - do you like Titanic, or hate it, or something? I'm seeing many subconscious themes...
16) What news? What news?
17) OH MY GOSH THAT DOUCHE. THAT COMPLETE AND UTTER SHOWER.
18) I mean, I already didn't like him when I thought he'd committed suicide. (I don't know if that was part of the story, or just conjecture I developed)
19) Hmmm. I can see with live reviewing that sometimes I am right and sometimes I must eat my words.
20) Awwww. I feel bad for her mum now. Honesty is the best policy.

Well, yes I have just finished off the story. Currently touring the UK, and heading to Paris soon. It's quite difficult to find
a) power sources
b) internet
PS. Yussss awesome Ocean is back.

Well that sort of ruins a lot of things. But on the bright side, he finally admitted that he loves her! Yay!

That was a sad chapter. I felt bad for Terra :( Ocean was so sweet though :) Update soon!

Ah! Sorry about that! In one of my stories, I have a redhead who's Courtney and I mixed the two up -.-' But yeah lol I meant Terra!
And thanks for emphasizing who Mr Monroe is :P
And whoa, this is a lot to take in for Terra! And I loved how you wrote this chapter! The descriptions were really good! :)
I feel so bad for Terra's mom! She's probably really heartbroken now over Terra :'( And Ocean! I'm so relieved that he wasn't the one to blabber away someone else's secrets! I never liked Rose but she must be desperate about Ocean; when a girl's mad about a guy they'd do anything in their power to keep them :/ But that's still no excuse for Rose to do that!
Loved this chapter! So glad you updated quickly! :)

Dang it so close! xD
I went for the near obvious. I should have looked at it more but hey it was fun heh :)
Wow. I feel like this is ending soon for some reason :O
Awesome chapter. Revelations secrets are out. Can't wait for the mother daughter reconciliation if that is even the fitting word heh. Thanks again. Keep it up

-iCY-

I LOVVE THIS STORY! SOOOOOO MANY TWISTS!

update soon:)

Well if it wasn't obvious before it's obvious now. Terra is so madly in love with Ocean. But there needs to be a major heart to heart if he ever wants her to forgive him and trust him again. Poor Scott! Victim of a one-sided love. How sad. I feel for him.

So... Terra's mom is hooking up with Scott's dad? Ew. But as long as it's not Ocean's dad, whatevs. Haha.

Yay thanks for updating! Update soon! I 3 your fic soooooo much.