Your story is very good and I like it a LOT! Aren't the next few chapters the last? Which is sad because I love the story but good because we all want a happy ending, lol

oh dear, i think i'll have to go back and read this all over again. I don't remember what happened in the previous chapters anymore...! Anyway, thanks for updating!

Wow! This story is so amazing! Your story made me stay up really really late to finish it . . . and well it was worth it. There is so many emotions with between every character. I love that! When I read it, I feel it too. There are so many instances that get me so made between Ocean and Terra. Man, they have so much anger. Yet . . . there are moments when they are so sweet to each other. Those moments make it so much worth it. Why are they both idiots? ? ? I love Moses, he is always so perverted . . . you can sure count on him with breaking the ice. But he is actually such a sweetie that cares about his friends. I like Scott. . . I feel terrible with how she'll never like him that way. He seems like such a good guy. But at the end of the chapter, I don't know. I have been very curious in the beginning with how Scott knew her . . . recognized her . . . how they first met. I hope that I will get some answers! I am seriously so glad that I have found this story. It is amazing! I do hope that Ocean and Terra will get there happy ending!

UpdaaaAAAAAaaaated! Thankyou :) more more!

Wow... Scott and Terra had a moment... He likes her... Her mother is with Mr Monroe... Don't all these cruel twists hurt your brain!? But wow! Courtney's feelings were almost tangible in this chapter! Your descriptions are superb!
But I wanna see her happy / And yeah I know, life isn't always necessarily happy but this is a story! Some happiness would be appreciated! Especially for someone who's gone through so much! This is so heartbreaking! And I was listening to Taylor Swift while I was reading this. Perfect timing! _
Oh and I forgot who Mr Monroe is so excuse me while I go figure out who that is :P

Ahkdla holy sheep! Did her mom cheat on her dad with Mr. Monroe?! Is that why he killed himself?! Either that or I am overdramatizing the situation o.o
Oh dang maybe that's why? My dumb guess is that her mom cheat on her dad with Mr. Monroe. He killed himself... And the reason why Rose and Scott know about her dad?
If not that then maybe her mom just started a relationship with Monroe there and Scott knew but was withholding the info from Terra?
I wonder what her true motive was for going on that unexpected trip to "London"
Damn I hope she and Ocean make up.. And man is that going to put a strain on their friendship, Scott and her... Now she is going to feel like her world is just falling apart :/
Read this all in one go xD can't wait for more
and Ocean is one confusing dude man -.-
Love it. Thanks :D

-iCY-

Hola Chica! Where have you been? Oh well, I hope you were having a good time. Merry Christmas!

Well, after the reread... Here we go; me being crazy again. Actually live reviewing this so I don't miss anything.

1) Yes! Anger! ANGER!
2) what? No more anger? I didn't see much in the last chapter :( , she just seemed hurt. Again
3) oo, upon the reread... I do think Mercedes overreacted a bit. Yes she was lied to, but I hope she has time to process what the truth actually is. We lost her dad for goodness' sake
4) "Could it be that it'd only been ten minutes?" NO! BECAUSE IF SO, THAT WAS A HUGELY LONG TEN MINUTES. (Sorry babe, love you! I kid, I kid. Just had to skip that in there)
5) I love Scott. I seriously do. He is just too perfect. Team Scott!
6) no, no awkward Scott silences :'(((((
7) ooo! She gon' get drunked up! ( autocorrect totally just changed that to debunked)
8) Newwwwww! Scottttt! Don't leeeeaaaaave him.
9) okay. May I just say, he would be perfect to be in a relationship with. However, I ship him so much because he ISN'T in this story. My heart is too sore from love triangles. I love him as her friend/fake boyfriend
10) speaking of, when is his promotion to best friend status? Hmm?
11) ha ha ha ha. Good strip line
12) no what is going on? Terra leave Scott alone! He is my beautiful.
13) oh. Right. Scott you wicked genius, I love you! (Forgive me, a Scott-centric review, for a pretty scotched up chapter. Haha I like that. Scotched. Hey - a drunk Terra phrase!) sadly this chapter with the drinking has already occurred, and this moment of genius has been lost to the cruelty of time. XD
14) wait, Terra no likey?
15) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
16) you should see my face right now. Every orifice is like this: 0
17) even my ears
18) Don't forget what I said earlier, but: ooh I like it :DDDDDD
19) thank you Scott! NONE OF IT HAS BEEN HER FAULT. Even though she may be annoying me just a little. Holiday perspective , I suppose.
20) ahahaha! I would write fan fiction about that night at the motel. Bahaha
21) oh crap, 5% power left. Will finish chapter and review later. Okay you're gonna get a review of a random chapter from me xxx

Love this story! Update soon :)

Ok. So here is what I want to say about it (besides that I absolutely love it and the PM I sent you XD).:
I want to see more of Scott. I'd be cool if Scott tried to comfort her and and with the tension between her and Ocean, her emotions could conflict and she could start to like Scott. Plus Ocean could start to feel jealous and all that. It's what I would do XD. But it's your story. I really just want to know more about Scott. :) If there is anything else to know. I'm sort of confused as well. Did her mother die? Or am I getting confused with a flashback? I usually put flashbacks in italics. Wait...maybe her mother comes back into the mess? I'm sorry, you just left me hanging! I'm like a person that takes off with a story, gives off a lot of ideas but never really follows through. So basically, I'm telling you what I'd do. But that's not really helping. XD So I'm going to stop blabbermouthing. Good luck with this story! -Mwah, E.L.J.J.J

I love this story! :) It's awesome! I'm on chapter 12.

THIS IS REALLLLY GREATTT! hahhaa but you should update more!

Please update. I miss this :

heyyyy! just end it already!

update pls..
cant wait for the next chapter

UGHHH, you have to update like soon. OFDJSAKJFSDKAJf, like pretty pleasseee.