|Reviews for think again|
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
I love "where do you want me/to/look for the fractured/me" and "a rocket shade of steel/endlessly." Beautiful. Especially the line breaks in the first one and the order of the words in the second. Ahh. Love that stuff. I'm sorry to hear you're having an identity crisis. Those are never fun. It's confusing and frustrating and you just want to cry and scream and throw things, hoping that will make it all better and help you figure out your life. I hope you do find some peace soon. Take care. Keep writing! :)
| Green-Eyed Genie chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
I like the form of the poetry, the small case letters and uneven lines.
Good choice of simple and effective words; the metaphors, the falling and being lost are a great description of the confusion and chaos that emerges when you have writer's block.
I totally empathise!
I hope you keep writing, I'd love to read more :D
| Isca chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
"A child relearning loss with empty hands." Beautiful imagery!
"Am I lost?" So sad!
I have to say that I liked the last few stanzas better than the first few, but that's just my opinion, so feel free to ignore it :P