|Reviews for Foreign|
| Narq chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
I like it how you exlore this word, making it seem very interesting.
and it IS interesting. Makes people think, it does :D
| AvidWriter-92 chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Hey, Dreamers. :) I quite liked this short little story. I tend to generally like things that make me think, and it's always a good thing to throw science fiction into the mix. :)
I've always wondered this too... Surely, there must be something out there besides ourselves, and if they do know about us, then why haven't they made it known?
I felt like your points were laid out very well, and the way you wrote it made it easy to see your side of the argument. :)
I do think that you used the words "alien" and "different" and "foreign" a bit too much. It made it seem rather repetitive at times. Maybe you should switch up your wording a bit?
~Avid, via the Roadhouse. :) Repaying reviews... 2/5.
| Charel Lebl chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
I like your ideas with this. It makes you think outside of the box about things. Nice work!