Reviews for From the eternity
OprahGirl chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
You have really good writing, i read a few other pieces of yours. and, you have a big imagination, cuz you have over 300 things that you wrote. :)
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
It's been awhile since I've read this so I can't remember what I said before, but I really loved that balloon part. It jsut struck me as such a beautiful image. The rest of it was nice as well, a bit confusing to follow in parts, but still a great job.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
This so awsome! I love it all. How well it flows how it makes you think and yet smile. Awsome job. Adding it to my C2 and my favs!

XKristie MarieX
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
beautiful. Peace.
Qzie chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
Aw... smile-worthy. . I laughed at, "Why do love stories make people cry/Even if most of them have a sad ending/it's all about true love." That's so true...

It's so sweet. Good job. :) Chat later. -Qzie, who is overdosing on smilies...
Franziska chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
Das Gedicht gefällt mir gut, wie es sich kontinuierlich bis "I love you" steigert.
Isca chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
This was so sweet!

I liked all of the creative imagery, such as the butterflies in the walls, and the balloons in the sky.

:)
Unknown Survivor chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
Wow that was really good. Great job on this. (:

Unknown Survivor
Living Life Free chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
The 9th, 10th, and 11th paragraphs are my favorite! I love this poem. It's cute.