|Reviews for Shadows in the Eye|
| BlackRosesFreedom chapter 2 . 7/12/2009
Wow. Tiff is a really good friend. I can already see her character coming out beautifully. I also really like the character development of Andrea. Really good story and I cannot wait for more. The only mistake i found was when you said: “And here we go again.” I murmured underneath my breathe. Breathe should be breath. But besides that, Great story!
| BlackRosesFreedom chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
ohh! Gave me chills. Awesome chapter. So powerful, so alluring, so beautiful! Love the story so far!
| Narq chapter 2 . 1/3/2009
OMG, you right so beautifully, I especially like the last few sentences, they were so awesome that I stopped to read them twice!
| Narq chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
This is nice... Have you seen "A Beautiful Mind"? the main character also had schizophrenia.
| tchaicat123 chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
so I really like this, I also found a couple grammar mistakes such as
Living in Vermont means there is plenty of trees. My aunt lived far away from the small town, and our home was surrounded by them-you said that she lived "far away"from the small town, it didn't really make much sense
Im also going to offer to beta-read because I really like the story and with a little editing it would be just plain awesome!
| myturntobebrave chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
This is good so far. Very intriguing. Just caught a couple of grammar and spelling mistakes.
"Living in Vermont means there is plenty of trees" - should be "are plenty of trees."
"Don't loose yourself" - should be don't lose yourself. But good so far.
I'll beta if you want.