Reviews for Break Free
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
[And light capture the darkness.] I really like this line. Very creatively worded.

I also like "unfold" in this first line. It gives the haiku a feeling of . . . erm . . . unfolding ;

[darkness.] should be a comma

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sTrive chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
Nice job and thanks for the review!
Needa S chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
Beautifully done. Write on.
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
I love this. Keep it up.