woow. i love the kiss scene. at first it was all anger and the chemistry just building up and bamm !

LOL that was so cheesy. but this was a great story :) good job.

I really liked this story, just to let you know. For "still in the process of learning english", your English is very good, better than a lot of stories I've read that are by people that speak English as a first language. Just one little thing I thought I'd point out to you. While it often sounds like we say "You better", it's actually supposed to be "You'd better" as in "You had better". It sounds weird, but it's true. Other than that, I didn't notice any grammatical errors, and your story was really great.

Nice one shot! Very well written - easy to read and very engaging. Thanks!

I liked how you wrote Rafe's emotions but it seemed like Mona was jut horny lol..good job!

love it.

adore it.

argh, it's awesome :D

and i really think that he is hot. like, fast&rough-hottie xD

love it.

i wonder how he managed to stop himself ! ;) nice story!

this is great

damn!

hot and heavy describes it well.

i like it and i rarely like lemons.

good job..why didn't u just call it "2 options" or something

Wow, your just learning English? This is amazing! It doesn't at all seem like you're learning it! It's emotional, and thoughtful, but just enough hotness! Bravo! I still can't believe that... It's really amazing!

Love, Dani

This is really good and very creative.

I'm a sucker for young, hot and handsome business men with a really sexy tattoo.

*sigh* .. that was a great read. i enjoyed it.

Really enjoyed it.

AWESOME!

like it? more like love it! you're still in the process of learning english? really? it doesn't sound like it! Kudos! you write better than most of the people i know who were raised on the english language

Oh my goodness, that was great..

I loved how you made him a good big brother. ]

So very well written, and it flowed magnificently.

Wow, I would have never guessed english isn't your first language.!

Amazing job ]

I think you should definitly continue writing. maybe make a full long story. I'd like to see what you'd come up with. this was an awsome short story. Please keep it up!