This is perhaps the most touching story I've ever read. I hope this story will proven to be inspirational to those who are disabled

This story has a good theme in it. Instead of suspense, it's more like agnst to me but never mind that.
Your story is very touching. I know a lot of those people back then and it reminded the pain and suffering they had before. This is a truly inspiring story.
I should tale note that there are some wrong spellings in each chapter

that was beautiful {crys} you are awesome !

Okay, I've been following the story for a while, like since earlier this year. And I must say...You did an AWESOME JOB! I love it so much! So much drama! So adorable! So romantic! So inspiring! So well written! I love it! This is one of the BEST stories on this website so far. Definitely numba 1! Keep on writing new stories for me to read. D You is supa talented. (hurrah for weird internet talking-ness) _~

Beautifully written and heart warming! I love the strong sensories how vividly is written. The characters are well written and the plot is very unique. But more importantly, how you brought up the common issue of autism and the evil of people's ignorance and judgement. Keep up the good work!

your idea for this story is very cute D Towa is so cute and the teenage boy, mysterious-like- sweetness. I'm curious to see where this goes, for now- I'll put this on my alerts.

see you soon

~Rayne

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Nice story set-up this is.

I have Aspergers too. So this is almost to my earlier years too, although not at Towa-chan's age.

I noticed a lot of autistic characters in your fics.

Overall, this is sweet and worth reading.

Wren back again! I'm really sorry I haven't been able to review sooner, I haven't been on FP for months cos of schoolwork. Anyway, I think your story's really starting to develop, and your writing style- I noticed it even in these last two chapters :) It was also really good to see a bit more of Hikaru's life- I'd be interested to know if the gunman at his parents' concert is a major plot point (if there's anything more to be revealed about why he was there in the first place, or if it was more for an interesting and emotional way for Hikaru to become an orphan.)

Also, I'd commend you (again? sorry for not reviewing before) for details about autism (I think they were in chapter 3.) You obviously know what you're talking about, and it's really good to understand.

Finally (just my opinion) I personally would really like to see Towa and Hikaru growing up together (or seeing their stories intertwine as they both get older) because I think it would be really neat to see how both their characters develop.

Nice work on these last two chapters!

Wren

Hello! I don't know if I've said this already, but I really do like the fairytale-style parts in italics- they tie the events together, really well. Also, I think you wrote Towa and Hikaru's next meetings well0- they seem like something which would actually happen, and were believable. Altogether, I like how events are progressing so far- good job! :D

Kawaii! An interesting story-the interludes with Towa as the snow princess were well-written, and were my favourite parts. It did seem a little artificial how all the characters were introduced- their whole names called out by their classmates and others, which I haven't seen happen often- but I did like the way you provided detailed descriptions of them. Well done!

This is a very promising story - it definitely hooked me. I have a mildly autistic brother, and I can see some of him in Towa's actions and mannerisms. You did a good job capturing that.

There were a couple of spots where the flow was a bit awkward and it did distract me a bit, but overall it was pretty good (if you want to have someone edit your chapters for you - which can be pretty helpful, since a different set of eyes might catch a mistake you missed - I'd be more than happy to do it for you).

I can't wait to read more!