Reviews for Pit Stop
Dwindling Fire chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
LOL. poor you [
Ultimate Schuyler chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
Aw, that sucks. lol
The Jab chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
This is so short and so simple. But it's effective. It's got developed writing. Well, I would hope so. I'm in an English Comp class too, and a lot of my submissions have come from the class. I can't say that this has ever happened to me, being that I don't wear any dresses, but I can see the embarrasment factor. People often tell me that I have "white stuff" on my face because I forget to check if my acne cream dried too visible. Luckily, I wash it off before I run into any girls :). Haha. Yeah, I guess being a guy, this experience can be likened to the toilet paper on the shoe scenario. I suppose.

Well, that's my "review". If you get the chance, I'd be ecstatic if you stopped by The Jabbe Chronicles. Even check the reviews, they're positive. :). Actually, don't. Some are spoilers. Just take my word for it. Or you could check out some of my Comp essays. I'd prefer the chronicles though. Thanks anyway for the sweet little essaylet.

Happy Writing,

The Jab
Bam-There You Go chapter 1 . 9/29/2008