|Reviews for Escape From Pizre|
| Account hase Moved chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
I would greatly appreciate if other parts of this story were put up. I noticed a few spelling errors. Like the very last line or so, Ermish is spelled Emrish. Very good, but also very wordy and trite. Try for more show not tell.
Looking forward to more
revenge is a bloody business
| Account Moved chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
it's very intriguing. i would love for you to continue with this story, it leaves so much to be explained and many adventures for one to think up.
keep up the amazing work,
The Macedonian Goddess