Reviews for Thou Shalt Not Fall for Thy Best Friend |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh plz update soon ! i really wanna read more... and its been 2 months :( so plz? update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying this, I hope you continue, even if you don't do longer chapters it's interesting enough to make me want to keep reading so well done :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() please updates oom |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww my heart sank when he said that to aj :[[ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dammit! Cliffhangering much? )yes, i know that's not a real word, but i don't care!) Please update, awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update soon. i personally don't think that the story is moving fast. and i would really love it if i would read the next chapter tomorrow:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() kay so im just throwing ideas out there what if: so AJ tell sean that they should just be friends &&so courtney&brenda ask her about it but they don't believe her and then brenda says something to eddie(?) about sean&AJ being really close and eddie mentions it to nate and its been like a month and a half since they last talked so nate is thinking that sean&AJ are going out for more than a month already and he starts acting jealous but he wont admit it to himself or anybody else and then one afternoon tyler was talking to sarah while nate went to the bathroom and all he hears is sarah bitching out on his brother because she was on the phone& he wanted to play with her but she jus kept ignoring him so he does something crazy to get her attention and then nate realizes that AJ was right about sarah. so he breaks up with her and heads over to AJ's house to make up but when he comes over, her mom says that Aj's out Nate asks if its okay to wait for her in her room but she says that "oh no, i meant she won't be back till nextweek" and then nate asks where she was and her mom says that she's over at sean's family's cottage so nate starts really getting jealous so he talks to brenda and courtney and they say that they think sean&Aj are getting prety serious and then nate kinda acts like the jealous ex boyfriend for a while and then him&Aj talk and agree to be friends again but in reality he's trying to make her fall for him coz he doesn't like sean and he regrets setting them up. CAN YOU PLEASE UPDATE SOON? those are jus ideas. you don't have to use them :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() ARGH... a really good chapter but you left it at the most exciting part! xD Love it, please continue this great piece of work! _ |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! Glad your back! Even if it's a short chapter it's better than no chapter at all. I understand that your trying to finish the story up, there is a lot of dialogue though. Can't wait to read the next chapter, but don't rush, and don't worry. Keep writing! ~Adrienne |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it, i would havea love a sean and nate fight, but its better this way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() she's about to break sean's heart. it is and isnt her fault. but poor sean and what's up with nate? please post her spending the night at nate's soon plz? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww...no! She's gonna break his heart right before they're supposed to have dinner with his family? I feel so badly for him. She was wrong for leading him on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It has been almost a million years! You really need to update this story more often! Really liked the chapter. Stupid Nate. But I'm glad AJ is some what happy with Sean. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I dont mind if the stories moving quick - at least I wont have to wait for it to be dragged along I hate cliffehangers but I got an idea what she might say - update when you can |