Reviews for The Dance
Euterpe's Bard chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
A rather profound and interesting way of viewing the creation of the universe. I have a similar belief, though mine involves a wheel rather than a dance.

On a side note, I find it interesting that you, for lack of a better word, "discredit" (I'm sure that's not what you were actually doing, but still) the Big Bang Theory and then compare creation to a dance pulsating dance. One variant of the Big Bang Theory is that it actually repeats itself, and the universe expands and contracts over billions of milenia. Sort of like a dance, I suppose...

-Euterpe's Bard
Thenardier chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
A delightfully unique way to view the creation of earth. I loved the exquisite description. The comparison of it to a dance is really, really beautifully done. A point to note, I believe you made a mess of the first line by accident, writing it twice. Also, I believe you meant to say until 'they' formed stars, not 'the' formed stars.