Reviews for Nights Like This
TaltushMeiMei chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Well, the plot of the poem is not bad at all. I like the descriptions coupled with the story. It makes for an easier read. I do feel that the flow could be better if the lines were better balanced. For instance, the "maybe" lines stretch on a bit too long and don't quite fit in with the flow. Same for the "When I'm laying" line (also, that should probably be "lying"). Also, raindrops is one word. If you corrected those few things, this poem would be quite nice.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
Oh I so no what you mean. I've had those alot. Hopey our breaks dont give out though. Awsome poem. Great Job!

XKRistie MarieX