Reviews for Foreteller |
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![]() ![]() ![]() great, I can wait to read the next chapter. Have to stop for tonight though. Will you check out my story "A RELIGION TO DIE FOR" and tell me what you think. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I can totally relate to her and her family, can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The action is great in this story, but I gotta admit I was thoroughly confused until the BEEPs at the end...I'm assuming she was having a dream? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good setup for the story. :) I like it, doesn't give too too much away like most stories in the beginning. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! You should try to change your summary though. Not as interesting as the story. IT was just a hunch that i decided to read it. And boy was it good! |