|Reviews for Promise, We Won't Go Down Like Beached Whales|
| Incurable Adoration chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
The title grabbed my attention immediately.
I like the title.
As for the poem, I found it to be in a different frame of mind than the title had me thinking. The haiku itself gave me the impression that the(narrator/writer?) was the one determined to make/keep things strong, whereas the title alone had me guessing that the point of view was looking to the other person for assurance.
I do like the piece, and I'm not suggesting that you change anything, but I did hope that how I read that would be interesting to you.