you captured the feeling with the last few lines so well. *clap clap*

WOW, I really love what you wrote. It sort of applies to what I'm dealing with right now, but I'm coping pretty good actually. 500 words by you already tells me you're a great writer; awesome job in writing this. :)

:( oh sister in arms! what hath we done to deserveth such horrid revelations, such feelings of pain that doth create upon us desires so fantastic, yet so gruesome, that we go verily into the darkest recesses of our mind? the ye-ole english generally means I loved it lol.

That is... Amazing. Wow. You shoot to the top of my Favorite FictionPress Authors list.

Very relatable. To me at least. Nice work. (:

~Unknown Survivor~