|Reviews for steeled|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Fp messed up and repeated your first line twice.
I really like the alliteration with "flinch, flinty" and "rain rivulets," etc. It works really well with piece. I also like your descriptions they are beautiful and unique as usual. Your line breaks and punctuation work really well too.
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