Reviews for Burning Love
Isca chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
My favourite lines were, "My darling blaze" and "Whispering flames."

Aww: "Why won't you ever burn out." I found that really sweet for some reason haha.

Good work!

SingLikeNo1IsListening chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
that was good. i really liked it. keep it up! ]


In State of Agony chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
i liked it just the way it is...keep it writing

"Whispering flames Why won’t you tell me your story? (I am shadowed by your games"
sunscraped chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
Wasn't great, wasn't bad. There were a couple typos in the last stanza. Maybe try incorporating some of the senses into it?