Reviews for Burning Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() My favourite lines were, "My darling blaze" and "Whispering flames." Aww: "Why won't you ever burn out." I found that really sweet for some reason haha. Good work! ~Isca |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was good. i really liked it. keep it up! ] luv, Glory |
![]() ![]() ![]() i liked it just the way it is...keep it writing "Whispering flames Why won’t you tell me your story? (I am shadowed by your games" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wasn't great, wasn't bad. There were a couple typos in the last stanza. Maybe try incorporating some of the senses into it? |