Reviews for Revolution
dustytiger chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
very well written, and thought provoking, i love the last two lines so many people can agree with that, thank you for sharing
sunscraped chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
This poem didn't really speak to me; parts of it reminded me of TV ads for voting for measure x or y.

For talk of a revolution, it's not quite provocative enough to live up to its name.

It had a few good points in there, though, considering the silence being bliss (yet there's counterpoints to that - breakdown of communications bliss as we've seen in so many relationships).

I think overall it's a rough start, but it's got some good foundation to build up into a good poem with some polishing.

- ss.