This. Is so. Amazing.
The story's plot, characters, and twists are all so intriguing! I love how you've made each character's personality so unique and easy to distinguish. They're all so lovable too, gah! Great job, I like how you kept a variety of old vampire myths true and left others as false. Also liked the different additions to their abilities, like reading emotions, glamour, etc.
There were some punctuality issues (commas in the wrong places) that would lead to run-on sentences, but they never really changed the sentence's meaning or detracted us from the story too much. Nice job overall though.
I love Petra. She's a unique character. She wasn't th typical heroine of a vampire story, with super sweet blood and nothing else. And her past is very mysterious too.
Great setting; I like how you included school, home, and even a hotel/vampire council. Hotel scenes were especially funny with Dimitri and Lionel.
Chapter 38 was awesome-the moment of truth where Garth and the other learn about Petra's predicament, and his sudden hunger pangs- and chapter 39 was SUCH a cliffhanger! I hope to hear more from your story; very, very excited! If I had an account, I would fave this for sure.

You seriously need to update this! I love it...don't leave me hanging

OH MY FRICKEN GOSH! you have too write more like right now!

love it so far :)

I've been reading your story from the beginning and firstly let me say it is the most fascinating story I'd ever come across, I lost interest a while ago when you didn't update for a while and now I come back to find out that Petra is liked by both Garth and Lionel! Oh please, you must update it soon! It's such a good story and your incredible writer. I hope you haven't given up on this story just yet as I'm sure this can't be the end of Petra.

Oh, I'm so happy you updated! So Garth and Lionel like Petra? Hmm, well I wonder what's going to happen now. This is a pretty good story :) Please continue it! I wonder if there's a way to get rid of Dominic...and Charlotte too. Although I like her better than Dominic even though she probably told him to do what he did...

I barely found this story a while ago and I finally caught up!

Now onto the real review:

Wow, this chapter gave me quite a scare. Hopefully Lee will be alive when the story ends because I'll just cry. And are you pairing her up with Garth?

omg fabulous i lovedit but i think you need more detil on like how gruesome you getbut other wise perfection. NOW DONT LEAVE ME HANGING! i cant wait for more!

-T 3

AAAAAAAH An update! Again!

And so dramatic!

I love how things are unfolding - do you have a plot already planned or are you just writing as it comes to you? I'm inclined to think you have a plan... but that makes me want to ask how it'll end and I know that it'll be better if I find out the long way...

Please update soon! :)

love me xx

absolutely devine! i loved it pls dont leave me stranded i see you've concured the act of vilonce n made it work great job ;)

AAAAAAH! Another chapter! Yay!

So I'm back as I promised and I'm leaving a review now that i've read the chapter. Heh. I'm sorry it took me so long, I was blown away with the plot twist in the last one and now this? I just had to leave a review.

I do miss Garth and the others a bit though. I know the story is centered on Petra and whatnot but I wish she would spend more time with them! Argh!

Anyway. The last two chapters have been wonderful, I love the way things are unfolding. I can't wait to see what Dominic meant by 'not yet', what Petra's role is, what Garth's role is, and how it'll all come together.

Love me xx

im very confused cant wait till nxt 1 so im not all confused n junk but i like it

-T

it was awesome i missed the ;ast few omg make garth n her kiss thatd totally b awesome. love the work plz update soon tell charollete n dominic to kiss my arse ;)

luv

-T

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Sorry this is an unsigned review I'll review properly when I read it

I just got the email and had to let you know how happy this makes me

THANK YOU

me xx

Hey I really love yor story, havent heard from it in a while. (: