Reviews for The Journal
blurrylights chapter 3 . 11/9/2008
I've read the first three chapters, and I like the writing, but I find the plot to be extremely improbable. After getting divorced, they still live together? With the girl who broke them up? Any normal woman would have moved out. And any normal man would have the common sense not to live with his ex wife and new wife...kind of stupid.

I;m curious to see where you take it, but really, I'm not sure if this would ever actually happen in real life. chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
i really feel sorry for her and please post the next chapter soon
Caitlin Blue chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
I feel so bad for her Damn that Hisham! I really like this, it's different.
readerchick11708 chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
i liked this! :D

cant wait to read more!
WonderGirl2020 chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
I really really like this. I cant wait for the update... soon please!