|Reviews for Are you waiting for someone?|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
"like a cold rain, I'll be sad.. Well,"... the word sad was so blah here. I know you know better words. Also the line break seemed weird line break
"it's impossible to catch a rain(tear)drop."... I really liked that parenthesis thing. It was a really nice touch.
It's a very bittersweet piece. You describe your emotions well. nice job.
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
This is awsome! Very sad but I can so relate. Awsome Job!
| Unique1952 chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
Another very good piece. I enjoyed reading this because of the emotion present. I also like the repetition, nice work.
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
Wieder ein sehr melodisches Gedicht, das mich an ein Lied erinnert, schon durch die einfache Wörter und die eingängigen Wiederholungen.
| May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
I really loved this. Keep up the excellent work. Peace.
| Anich chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
This is very well written and it relates to me in many forms. I really wish I could describe the way this evoked old emotions and feelings for me that I still have and I know I will always carry. Well done.
| Isca chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
"It'll fall someday, like a cold rain." That line really captivated me. It's so beautiful and sad, and the imagery is amazing! :)
"I've dreamt of you." That line has a lovely profound quality to it.
"I don't want to live without you." AWW! *Tear* So beautiful!
| Qzie chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
Oh. :( I feel so sorry for the guy the speaker's talking about. It hurts when you get shot down all the time and then the perfect person is right in front of you...
*Thumbs up* Chat later. -Qzie
| UnicornSlayer chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
this is great!