Reviews for A Dream
RandomlySilly chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
I really, really liked this.

The repetition just adds something to it, and it was such a pleasure to read.

Sad and beautiful - wonderful combination.
Jint Jacob chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Amazing Poem... The funny thing about this poem is that i feel the same way, that no one really see me and that im closed off from the world. This poem just really touched me and got to my heart like i was stabbed and i feel i know now that there is someone out there that thinks the same way i feel but you were able to put it to words.

I used to feel this way until i came to CCHS and met friends and one of those friends that made me come to see the real world was you... great job with the Poem... keep up the good work
HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
That was excellent. You can really feel the hope and anger in it and the last line was heart breaking.
Amaury chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
I really enjoyed it.

You're an excellent poet.
J. D. Bennett chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
Very interesting how you made it into a poem and a story. I think it's very good. I think you could go deeper, and have a bit of a storyline here. WHY is she so depressed? WHY does she feel like a shell? It says at the end "a mourning heart." I wish you would go into that a little more, but for the most part, I like it.