Reviews for Spirits
Majorcrush chapter 8 . 11/4/2008
Abosolutly amazeing.
k-ky chapter 8 . 11/4/2008
it seems a little similar with a story writen by Meg Cabot in the beginning.

but the book is about a ghost and yours is twin. haha.

anyway, i like the story.

update soon
Unidentified14 chapter 8 . 11/4/2008
Plz UPDATE
Big Boots Man Of War chapter 8 . 11/3/2008
Nice chap! I must say, in the previous chapter, I loved the moment between Ava and Edwin! Gorgeous!

Npw, i am sorry, but I am a little dippy today.

Madison? Would anyone like to explain to me, uh, how she is related to everyone etc. And her purpose?
awdkljgbekrng chapter 8 . 11/3/2008
why's william being such a jerkface? what's madison going to show her? nice cliffy!
a.mooch chapter 8 . 11/3/2008
*Exorcist music in the back* Hey look, my phone's ringing! *laughs*. Spooky, can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep on writing, this is a fun story, and I can't wait to read more. :)
a.mooch chapter 7 . 11/3/2008
When Cole says " ghosts " what he means is " ghosts' ". Because he is talking about two of the same kind of people. But other than that microscopic grammatical error, fantastic job! :D
wingsrookie chapter 8 . 11/3/2008
yay! you're on a roll! updates! (sque!)
Quit Being So Technical chapter 8 . 11/3/2008
hehe, yes you did! Now will u make us all a favor and let Edwin and Ava KISS ALREADY? its kiling me! *cries* ... that sounded so bitchy! IM SO SORRY! lol. Update soon! (im not a bitch... am i? Hmm... when in doubt turn to friend. must ask friends! Tootles!)
Narq chapter 8 . 11/3/2008
YUP! That sure did~ Thanks~ I'm waiting for the next update~

Narq.
blushedaway chapter 8 . 11/3/2008
ah did you have to stop there? :(

i wonder if edwin was acting all weird in the beginning because she's trying to help him move on and he doesn't want to?
Only-Ten-Thousand-Things chapter 8 . 11/3/2008
Yay! I got to read more of the story! Yay! You have no idea how happy this made me lol. Today was a crappy day cause I'm sick, but I read this and now I'm happy! It totally made my day! Thanks for updating, I totally love everything so far, William totally cracks me up lol. Can't wait to read more :)
GoodNightMoon chapter 8 . 11/3/2008
Ah ha, I did a mental happy dance when I got the alert that there was a new chapter :] And I really needed a pick-me-up because exams are tomorrow... yeah Loved the chappie, can't wait to read the next one!
Quit Being So Technical chapter 7 . 11/3/2008
UPDATE SOON! :)
Narq chapter 7 . 11/2/2008
Fianlly! I was wondering when you'd update... I was going to message you! Great chapt~~

Narq.
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