I think you might want to edit this: William had been found dead in the main room of the home, killed 'my' a blow to the head. Edwin was in his upstairs bedroom, stabbed in the stomach.

It should be 'by' right?

By the way, good work, I liked this chapter.

Keep it up~

Narq.

I like it, it's intruiging. very intruiging.

you should update

It's a great start I can't wait to see what happen's in the next chapter :D

cool story, please update, I want to know what happens.