Reviews for Stand Alone
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
This is so beautiful and has so much emotion in it! I know that a lot of us readers will probably be able to relate to this at some point in our lives that makes it even more amazing.
Isca chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
"Trembling." I love this line. It fits so well with the 'rays of moonlight' imagery and really enhances the speaker's emotional personality.

"Standing alone. Deserted." Whoa. This ending is so heart-breaking. I love the fact that this entire moment was all a fantasy, a dream, a memory of love. That's brilliant. :)
Keree chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
That was touching...
He Named It Fluffy chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Ouch. I feel the emotion portrayed here. Good job :)
S.J. More chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
I'm defintely the female in this poem. I do believe I have said "I dislike holding hands." to someone before. :- I'm not sure if I broke his heart or not? Hmm. But all of it was very good!
StarlightWish17 chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
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That was so sad. But I could totally feel the emotion in this. It was beautiful - again! Lol! I really loved this one. It was just awesome. Every word you used fit so well. It's great. Love!
the-ever-changing-name chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
WOW this stirs up the emotions! great job foolio
effervescent-sentiments chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
I like the mood of this poem. :) Try using your senses to create more concrete imagery - it'll really help, as pretty as abstract ideas can seem.

Good luck!

Jules
CayleighChan chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
Oh my goodness...

This was great, suspencful...

I kept wondering exactly what the next line would read.

Sad, wonderful ending...

I LOVED IT!

You should write more poetry! :)
Vegetarian Meatballs chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
Very good. IT flowed together nicely. I liked how you told a story from beginning to end. Nice work. :)
PoetryQueen chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
A very nice flow. The imagery is amazing. Great job!
UnicornSlayer chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
this is beautiful _

keep it up!
Stranger Than Most chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
i know exactly how u feel. i love ur writing so please keep it up? thanks

stranger than most
SaphireTsukikage chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
I still find it surprising how only half a page can have such an impact on people. even only a few words can have a major impact. This story is something that would impact a lot of people. Good job
Marie Bee chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
nice.
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