stop putting yourself down! this is an entertaining story.

This was great! I love Mitch, and the ending was perfect. You didn't drag it out either, which i find is really common around here, so good job im gonna read the sequel now!

love it so far

I like this Mitchell/Sunny chapter the best of M's chapters so far. Good stuff.

Ellie has redeemed herself, now it's Cody's turn. Just because a person is an a**hole like Jonas doesn't make it better when people turn into the same thing to deal/confront him. Angry, sure, but hating hate never solves the problem. Good writing if I can analyze your characters like I would real people.

Uhm, sure, okay, because Jonas' self-discovery should lead to his total acceptance of the behaviour he's been inflicting on himself and other's for how long? Yeah, sure, most people accept themselves as gay or whatever in increments of hours, right? Sorry for the sarcasm but... we all react differently but I've never met anyone who made that adjustment that quickly, especially hormone cursed teenagers. Jonas is definitely a homophobe, and not a nice person for unleashing his own opinion on others but "if you prick him does he not bleed?" (Shakespeare)

SEQUEL, ACTIVATE! *pumps fist in the air*

Eeep. Wonderful.

That was a bit unexpected, and by unexpected, I mean COMPLETELY EXPECTED! Not really, but I WILL TAKE OVER THE TRI-STATE AREA! AHAHAHAHAH!

Sigh, I probably won't.

I was waiting for the parent part... sigh.

Roar. That wasn't nice.

Whoa. I was NOT expecting that. Wow.

Heheheheheheheheh.

Oooooh. Oooooooh. Ooooooh. Sunny is...

It was pretty obvious as soon as he walked into the classroom, though.

Westboro baptist much?