I like your story so far. What I like the most about it is that it's original and unpredictable! Jonas is cool being homophobe (he's already breaking and it's cool too!) and I love that Sunny isn't the author of the journal. I like Sunny but you made it more interesting and hard to read what's going to happen next that way!

And it's great how you joined two stories in one by making those part one/part two chapters. I Like it!

Aw, how cute! Yay Mitch!

That was so sweet. :)

Hahaha! I love Cody. He's so awesome! :)

Personally, I think Jonas is being absolutely ridiculous, but it seems like he's gay. I can't wait to see what happens!

I liked your little end side notes as much as the story, which I really enjoyed. You still have a few mistakes after your editing, but it's not too bad. The story would be better if you linked the parts of both brothers closer together, like make them have more conversations with each other or what not. Nice work!

Oh my god…

I was gay…

…For Cody…

WHAT THE HELL!

WHEN HAD THAT HAPPENED?

roflmao! wonderful story by the way!

Lovely :) Even if his parents are twats...

Ha :) Love his Dad!

Aww cuteness :)

“That’s one fucked up looking stick figure.” Cody commented, which I thought was completely unnecessary.

- Go Cody!

Hahahaha omg I love Jonas. He's so funny :D And Cody teasing him like that...tut tut :)

I loved this story beyond words! I just finished it, and I’m about hyperventilating in my chair with warm feelings and happiness while I flail and gasp for breath so I don’t choke on my own saliva. This story was AMAZING! I have to admit, I have a thing for the high school-slash-romance stories, with the geeks and jocks and shy guys, and them getting together, and all the plot/funny stuff inbetween is just icing on the cake. So of course, I LOVED this story. So much that I can’t type out how much I love it without uselessly repeating myself. I’m usually better at reviews, but you’ve got me on such a high. Totally made me night. And I am going to read the sequel!

Your story is so different from the others. (In a good way)

I love this story and I love The Perks Of Being A Wallflower. (Patrick is my favourite) :D

'I feel infinite'

:D

I loved this story. The plot was awesome. I loved Cody and Jonas' love story and how Jonas struggled with his feelings and his identity before finally realizing how he felt. It was cute and I really liked it. I liked the hopeful ending for Mitch. At first I didnt think I'd like his story much but I ended up loving that aspect of the plot. How he was drawn to the journal and Sunny and then he realized that Sunny wasnt for him. And int he end when he met that new guy Taylor, I just smiled becuz I just though...sequel! lol. I like Mitch alot. In fact he is my favourite character int he story just becuz he is like a loner and misunderstood and I can relate to that. He basically has my exact personality. He's shy and has antisocial tendencies but isnt necessarily antisocial. And I loved how Sunny explained the difference betweent he two. So definitely Mitch is my fave just becuz I relate to him so much. Im str8 but it upsets me how ppl treat homosexuals. Its sad how Jonas' parents turned him out even though he was their only son and it made me think alot abt what gays have to endure throughout the world. Its unfair because I think that God wants us to love evryone despite their differences and preferences, but ppl stl feel they have the right to dish punishment out as they see fit. I love your story and the issues it deals with. Great joba nd I lookf orward to reading the sequel. :)