|Reviews for What a Coincidence|
| Jevanminx chapter 19 . 12/17/2008
Aw, yay they are dating, I suppose it is sad that it wasn't real, but it was based off Sunnys real feelings. And they are dating now WHOOP, can't wait for Jonas' chapter.
| andee lee chapter 19 . 12/17/2008
ha ha! you make me laugh.
I LOVED HAILEY. she was fun. i hope she doesn't go anywhere. and where's this fool david? i need to see if he was good enough for my sweet darling sunny... ha ha!
NO ONE IS. NO ONE BUT MITCH!
I'm glad Mitch is finally gonna get some of that darn lovin he needs! WOO WOO!
My heart is pitter-pattering right now. i am literally dying while waiting for the next chapter ... JONAS AND CODY ahh sweet LORD!
| VivaLaQueen chapter 19 . 12/17/2008
Very very nice story.
:] I Love it.
Just a little thing.
I liked Cody?
Yes, I did.
I liked him...
I had feelings for him.
So what did that mean?
Because I was male and so was Cody.
But I wasn’t attracted to males. I was only attracted to Cody.
But Cody was male and I liked him, so...
Oh my god...
I was gay...
WHAT THE HELL!
WHEN DID THAT HAPPEN?
In here, you are saying "was" meaning past tense.
"I 'was' gay" means he used to be.
"I 'am' gay." means the present.
"I liked him" He used to like him
"I like him." He likes Cody, the present.
"Yes, I 'did'."
"Yes, I 'do'."
You're using the past tense as you can see but other than that :] Its still amazing.
| Iconic chapter 19 . 12/17/2008
Yay! Sunny and Mitch are going out! I'm so happy for them! That twist with the journal was awsome; there's no way I could have seen that one coming. Fantabulous!
I don't think I can wait till the next chapter. I might perish from anticipation!
Thanks again for replying to the reviews; i love it when an author takes time to do that.
And stop being bashful! I only give compliments to those who deserve them and you denfinatly do.
You rock. Never stop writting.
| Abstruse Blue chapter 19 . 12/17/2008
You know what I would probably have done the same thing about the spider, since I've done that before. Like when there was some kind of bug crawling on the floor and my dad was just going to bed and I started yelling at him to come kill it. xD Anywho, how could I not see this outcome? lol How clever of you! I absolutely love this chapter though. -rejoices for Sunny and Mitchell- They are both so adorable. I can eat them with chocolate drizzel and whip cream? yummy, that's how sweetly cute they are.
| misery sister chapter 19 . 12/17/2008
Just wondering. Since there IS a personal review reply button... always been there even before this story was written.
| Aylute chapter 19 . 12/17/2008
Hey there, I happened to stumble on your story cause I was looking for some good male slash (I'm so addicted to those stories lol). Not gonna lie, I was laughing at quite a few parts, cursing Robert King (stupid homophobics) and crying when Cody was upset. You know when you're so happy you start crying? Well I had a couple of those moments too .
Thanks for brightening my night?morning? and I'll be looking forward to future chapters.
I did find 3 or 4 mistakes (general spelling) through the story and one missed period but that was about it. Thanks so much for not making tons of mistakes through your story! (It's one of my biggest pet peeves on here).
Mitch is, by far, the coolest and best character in here. Nobody else can live up to that. Sorry guys. (I wish he was my little brother).
| Reine Ayten chapter 19 . 12/16/2008
No I haven't seen that one! PM me a link, PLEASE! I have a really cool picture I found for my friend (she's a huge Sora/Riku shipper) where Sora's in short shorts and a torn off mesh shirt that goes to just above his belly and on one hand he has a pair of handcuffs and he has a collar with a chain that Riku's holding and Riku's wearing baggy jeans, mesh gloves, and a mesh/heart thorny design/patchwork vest thingy, and Sora's saying "Pull my chain
| Love Eternally chapter 19 . 12/16/2008
I loved this chapter. I can't wait to see how their date goes. It's just wonderful
| Nova laVie chapter 19 . 12/16/2008
yay! how awesome of you! very well done and thought out - i love sunny - and i love to see a works title in the work itself - that always makes me oh so happy
| KIWI chapter 19 . 12/16/2008
xD if i do get a bad grade on my exams, it's okay. i'll forgive you. since you wrote this. and it's my fault i clicked on it. NOT THAT I REGRET IT!
"we'll see about that"? there has to be kissy and touchy and other yummy stuff. it just has to! or.. ... *drowns in puddle of tears*
okay, so two more days of exams (aka THINK OF CODYxJONAS TIME) . cannot wait. for the next chapter. kekeke. what's your update schedule? like, every three days?
| Hyperbole23 chapter 19 . 12/16/2008
This is such a great story! Probably my favorite fiction press story!
I can't believe that whole diary was fiction. Poor Mitch, but hey, at least he and Sunnie are finally gonna go out.
As great as Mitch is, I can't wait for more Jonas and Cody. They're my two favorite guys on all of FictionPress! I hope you do more with them soon.
Another amazing chapter!
| kfjkaskm chapter 19 . 12/16/2008
Never mind, about thing Hailey and marriage thing! *fold arms* Gosh, It's so hard to find a fictional boyfriend without him being gay or actually being a girl! Yay, Mitchell and Sunny are going out! The journal thing makes so much sense now. I got my cousin into the story now and she loves it too. Excepts she loves Jonas and Cody so much that she skips the Mitchell and Sunny part. Can't wait for next chappy! Voo Doo Cody sends his love. He couldn't bear reading this chapter. He had like freaking spasm when he founded out that Jonas was gay for him. I love that line from the last chapter. Make sense Jonas isn't gay for guys, Jonas is gay for Cody!
| ShadowMe chapter 19 . 12/16/2008
Great chapter. The twist with the journal was great. I never would of even guessed that it went like that. Keep on writing!
| xSadistxFujix chapter 19 . 12/16/2008
Let me just say this story is REALLY unpredictable. But that's a good thing. It keeps me interested. I am completely enamored with PATD! Like seriously. My youtube name is xRyDoNxFoReVeRx. Meaning, of course, Ryan and Brendon forever. They're just so CUTE together! Brendon used to always try and kiss Ryan. Them hugging and Brendon even slapped Ryan's ass once. Gosh, if they were really a couple I would totally die. I'm already a shipper of them so... hehe.
ANYWAY. Yeah, PatD is like the best. Along with MCR, Cobra Starship, Placebo (Love them. Been around since 1994. the year I was born! the lead singer, Brian is bisexual, and the guitarist, Stefan, is gay. I'm not sure what their newest drummer is though. Their old one was straigt. Talk about a diverse band!), Simple Plan. But this is just my opinion. And I'm gonna ramble some more, ok? OK!
Me LOVES Nuke (noah/luke from As the world turns), Ollian, DeRo (though... grr), Jp/Craig, and my fave now (Sorry Nuke!) is Justin and Brian from Qeer as Folk. I may be a BIT (but only a BIT ;P) to young for that show but damn it! Who really cares? I don't. Now I'm just going on and on about myself. You don't have to continue reading to this if you don't wanna.
My fave color is green. (my love for it started with Slytherin)
I love the movie Velvet Goldmine! (OMG! If you haven't seen it I so need to send you the link to it. As long as you don't mind naked hot guys and one of those guys using his tongue to play another hot guys' guitar during a concert!)
Merlin is only the best show in the world and its full of great potential slashiness between Merlin and Arthur (they're the same age though in this one). I wish they would get together! They would be my NEW fave slashy couple. I'm just full of slash. And I think I should stop now considering I don't know if I have school tommorow (I didn't have any today or yesterday) and I wanna watch Dawson's Creek (mostly on for Jack since he's gay (I got an obsession with gay guys as you can tell) but I do like Pacey and Dawson, Andie is cool to. Don't really like Jen and Joey. And you might not even know what I'm talkin about. I've never seen this show before now and I'm gonna go.