|Reviews for What a Coincidence|
| xSadistxFujix chapter 7 . 11/5/2008
I LOVED this chapter! Jonas' thoughts are just so funny that you can't NOT like it. You want to read it? Sure. The story is on here. Its called THe Promised Years, title in progress. I would LOVE if you read! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| MisterScotty chapter 7 . 11/5/2008
I believe Jonas and Cody are one step closer into getting into each others pants. :)
This chapter was cute and funny. Oh, good old wet dreams. lol at Jonas praying to god about it. Anyways, honestly, i find star tattoos kind of over rated. But it's just a minor detail and my opinion.
I can't wait to see how the next chapter turns out.
| Love Eternally chapter 6 . 10/30/2008
I love this story. Update soon. I actually think Cody is my fave character. Jonas comes in second because he makes me laugh.
| Blood Stained Kiss chapter 6 . 10/28/2008
Ack! I'm completly in love with this story! Write more soon.
| Kaybug150 chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
I am honestly loving this story. I've been known to speak the word 'ASS!' aloud when reading about Jonas's homophobic ways. He makes me angry.
Which reflects on your writing skills, because it's a very good thing to make a reader feel such strong emotions.
Very good job!
| LaylaLivesLoosely chapter 6 . 10/27/2008
very cute. I look forward to reading more!
| Stooped chapter 6 . 10/26/2008
OH MY GOODNESS! THIS IS SO GOOD! Jonas pisses me off. I hate homophobes. They're really annoying and I'm not even gay. But I heart Cody to the max. I LOVE THIS! UPDATE SOON!
| Abstruse Blue chapter 6 . 10/26/2008
Oh my goodness, I love this! So much right now. I am terribly curious as to how things will go especially who is the author of that journal. The interaction of Cody and Jonas is so great too. Can't wait for more!
| MisterScotty chapter 6 . 10/26/2008
HAha, good thing you mentioned it in your other story, or else i wouldn't have known to look!
I guess you have to build up to get the story going, like slowly approaching the climax of Mitchell's part of the story. I think you'll be fine as long as it picks up and doesn't stay a one note about how he's connecting with the journal, you know? It's good now because where ever you're going with his story, it's probably essential for him to connect with the writer.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Wo. Maybe Cody will be one step closer to Jonas. ;)
| JtheChosen1 chapter 6 . 10/25/2008
lol yeah i knew my last comment was a little too far out there, but its all good!
only critique about this chapter is the last part: "Did I really look Cody?" I think you meant, "Did I really LIKE Cody?"
keep up the good work, and if I'm ever kidnapped one day randomly, I'll know it was you before you pull the bag off my head XP
| Cattails chapter 6 . 10/25/2008
I totally know that feeling O_O I hate being distracted in class like that XD Happens more often than it should... Yay, more journal reading! Wonder how long until he realizes it's him...? Hmm... Yay, and Ellie! Pft, she totally just rocked his world XD Can't wait for the next chapter!
| gallowsCalibrator chapter 6 . 10/25/2008
Lol wow that is a really good story. Can't wait for you to update!
| xSadistxFujix chapter 6 . 10/25/2008
Yeah, I guess you will have to let them go. I'm writing a book actually, I also have it on here, its about four, two more than the others, and they are best friends. It is going to be very dramatic and I'm only writing the third chapter so far but I'm ALREADY attached to the characters and its as close to slash as it can be with no real yaoi feelings or anything which is kinda close and it gets REALLY dramatic... and tragic. I'm writing two stories with one of the main characters in it but the second one won't be him as a main character, he'll hardly be in it at all. And I'm prbably going to bawl when its time to let go of them. sigh. Its going to be hard though like... I don't know, getting rid of a drug addiction that you want and don't want to let go of at the same time. Ok, now I've rambled. Great chapter! chapter four part two? So long from now... well, probably not but it feels that way since I'm looking forward to it.
| cRavingsAnity too lazy XD chapter 6 . 10/25/2008
Mitchell makes my heart melt like butter on a heated pan. x] I hope the author (whom I -suppose- he ends up with) treats him right. Hmph. I do think the author will, since the author's thoughts are just... so fascinating.
Cody still makes me want to slam him against the wall and kiss him senseless. Thank God he's bisexual, or else I really wouldn't have any chance if he were gay. -sadness-
Keep writing. It makes me happy. x]
| Nova laVie chapter 6 . 10/25/2008
hey, so when i was reading and mitch was like 'the feeling he gets reading the journal'? well i was like wow i feel that great reading it too, and reading him reading it, and the whole story really! super great chapter i just love it!
oh and no prob, my C2 was oh so happy to have it :)