Reviews for What a Coincidence |
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![]() ![]() ![]() When you went through a second time, you got all your previous mistakes; or at least, I didn't notice any. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, loved it! Jonas and Cody were just to adorable! And Mitch is just to cute. I can't wait to start reading the sequel! - |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Um, so I'm reading the sequel to this now, and I just thought, you know, if you happen to uh, change it a little, you might want to consider making Jonas a little more random at the start? Like, because he is later on, a lot, but it's kindof introduced after he stops being a homophobe.. But he's supposed to have been like that already. I mean, unless you did that on purpose or something... I just thought. I don't know? uh. yeah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() !omg I like taylor already :D Thankyou for a SEQUEL :D (btw, i'm sorry my reviews don't really tell you... much... but i kindof suck at reviewing so i guess this is as good as it gets :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just noticed a slight mistake... I think. Here you said that Mitch was 15, but you said on the chapter when they're eating that he would be 17 next year. Unless I read that wrong... |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT? |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() LMFAO Gayboy playing footsie with the homophobe. Love. it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and the way that it's not really predictable like a lot of stories on fictionpress. I really want to read the sequel now :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "And my powerade tastes like green apple airheads." Overcooked bacon tastes like peanut butter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You love this chapter. I love cheezits. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes. Everyone (rather, the only person who really matters AKA me) does like a little lesbian action. There's a TV show I recently discovered where there is a lesbian couple. Pretty much the only thing the show has going for it. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd bet that your neighbors wanted the fruit that you shared with us, so they decided to not share explosives with you. (That kinda makes it sound like they are secretly taking over Iraq or something. Like, "Here's dynamite for you. What piece of Iraq would you like decimate?" *blinks* Umm...yeah...) I never got the fruit, btw. But, I guess that's saved for people who dislike your story/the mistakes in the story? Damn. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really, really love it:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() with the new characters, idk who would be the dairy be speaking off. I feel really bad for cody sometimes. but at least he kissed him . |