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| Time To Change chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
| Manifest-Destiny-x X chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
I like the sarcasm in it. It helps to bring across the greater message.
| Shasta Valentine chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
that says you won't last.
you won't last.
although i dont understand the repetetiveness, or the mention of the month your words were well crafted in this one. i understood it well, good job.
| Isca chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
The first line was beautiful! I love Autumn imagery.
"Shape up." A simple, yet powerful message.