aww this was sweet - his ramblins were so funny!"and you have great hair" had me laughing really hard xD

That was cute, really cute.

This story is HILARIOUS! When I got to the part, "For God's sake, he was meeting MBWWRMOAPUTEOOHP!", I couldn't stop laughing. hehe. Great story!

This is absolutely wonderful! I love Tony. He's hilarious.

so cute!

dis was really good. ur oter ones still suck tho. but dis was funny and smart. but u shud change the title. i thawt it was insest but its not so u shud change the title so peple wont be confused.

Aw, Tony is so CUTE! He's just so weird he is easily converted to adorable! And Riel is the mysterious uke who should be outright illegal for being so cute.

FAVS

This was completely hilarious and adorable XD I love Tony so much. He is such a spaz. Haha. I was giggling so much. And poor Gabe...so much abuse. He's too cute. But they make a great couple, so it's all good :D Ah, I completely love this story.

Sharing is caring! Yes it is. I'm very familiar with word vomit. I often do it myself. Honestly, you think you need to say "I need to go to the office because my mom said to call her", when all the teacher needs is "I'll be back". Bastards.

IN ANY CASE. I liked this. And Riel is a good nickname :D

HA! I loved this! It was freaking awesome! I love how everyone doing this challenge makes it so different... this is my favorite so far!

(Wow, that's a lot of exclamation points.)

Oh my god! I love you! For the whole eating up words thing. My girlfriend does that all the time, when she's nervous or embarrassed, I find it to be the cutest thing since the word was invented...for whichever reason. But yea, I loved the characters, they were so vivid. And you could really see how close Melissa and Anthony were, even though it got psychic-scary at some points. Especially when she dissected the reason of Anthony's calling Gabriel 'Pierre'. Like that seriously freaked me out, I have a TWIN and I can't do that. Then again, we're not that close. At all. But still. xD

Cheers

September-Lee.

Aww that was so majorly cute!

My fave part was defenitely when Lissy (yes I can't be bothered to type the long version) explained the whole pierre thing without batting an eyelid.

They must really know each other well. I found that sweet.

Over all, an awesome oneshot.

My GOD! SO FUNNY! -dies of laughter-

Yeah, I'm doing the challenge too, just starting to work on it! ANd what exactly is the significance of him calling Gabe Riel?

Lee

I loved Tony! Definatly one of the best characters i've come across on ficpress. Good luck with the comp :)

Ha ha ha what an awesome entry! I love Anthony, he's totally the kind of character that deserves a full story instead of just a oneshot ::hinthint:: You developped your characters really nicely, i love how you have female characters who aren't the classic bitchy ex and is actually presented in a positive light :)

Gabriel/Riel/Gabe/Pierre is so cute. I want t grab him and tie him up and rape him. Yesh ::licks lips:: I love how cute and bullied he is...I love the interraction between the two! I can totally imagine how they'd make love and it's wonderful! Anthony, by the way, is totally Gabriel's BITCH.

My two favourite Anthony pearls of wisdom? :D

"For God’s sake, he was meeting MBWWRMOAPUTEOOHP!" that made me splutter with laughter and snicker repeatedly and enthusiastically.

"you’’" Anthony is SO cute. He's so...ugh, he's gay and yet male in a way that is totally perfect.

Oh, and nice job with incorporating the required words. I is liked it vewwy much. If all the entries are as good as the ones I've had yet it'll end up being even harder to pick winners than _

Anyhows. Well done. I'm totally expecting your participation for the next challenge. Also, well done with doing this in such a short amount of time. I'm impressed :)

Take care and THANKYEW SO MUCH! ::huggles::