|Reviews for Fine China|
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
I like the succinctness (sp?) of your lines. It gives them a lot of meaning and impact.
I like the sections at the beginning and halfway through that rhymed. They had a very nice flow to them.
The only thing I did't like was the one long line. It felt awkward and bulky. I'd have split it after "learn," but that could just be me.
Anyway, very nice poem.