Reviews for Dining With Beauty
poetic heretic chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
You took one of my favorite fairytales and made it my ver ver very favorite. So pretty...the imagery is amazing. My favorite lines would have to be "Oh,/ Her throat, the color of delicious cream, the kind I used to dip my fingers / Into without guilt from the baker's eats, with no care of his effort to make them Beautiful, and put upon my tongue to swallow without taking / care / To even relish the taste. If only I had relished that cream, the way I now crave to / Relish her in the cockles of my awful heart."

Keep writing..or else!