Reviews for Angel's Fall |
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![]() ![]() ![]() who is she is this a sasusaku fic? and the story is pretty good so far but u need to update more of ur stories and y do u only have to faves r all of the stories just stories like books that resemble nothing that is the same unless they r by the same wrighter? well talk 2 u at home -the grim reper |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter! pls update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovedlovedloved it cant wait for more! hope you update soon! -ifly*hugs* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Moar. I must have MOAR. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this. it's really good, and i am slightly dissapointed that the minute i decide to start reading this that you decide to not update. I WANT TO KNOW THE ANGEL GUY'S NAME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() o nice one i swear i'll leave a longer review on the next chapter update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think i forgot to review this chapter. i personally love reviews. they motivate me to write more. so i'll give you as many as possible. pls update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahh its reallyreally good pls update! thank youu -artificial destiny |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really good :) |
![]() ![]() Cute story! XD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was really good near the beggining you said that she kept getting flashes of images, but all you specify is the dream. Also, i think you should have had her distinguish that the images and emotions weren't just her imagination. Just like a sentence about it or something I also noticed how at first the girls refered to the angel as "it" and then after Amelia touched his hand they refered to him as "He" I'm not sure if that was on purpose or not, but that was really good! cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so good! So Good! SO GOOD! love it love it love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was gr8! trying to type fast to go read the next chapter! I really liked that a lot. I loved the transition from scene to scene. It was fast, but paced. REALLY GOOD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, very interesting! I'm loving this story. Also, thanks a ton for specifying that it takes place in the 1880's. I was under the impression it was modern XD |