Reviews for Angel's Fall
BlAcKoNiX chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
who is she is this a sasusaku fic? and the story is pretty good so far but u need to update more of ur stories and y do u only have to faves r all of the stories just stories like books that resemble nothing that is the same unless they r by the same wrighter? well talk 2 u at home

-the grim reper
artificial destiny chapter 4 . 3/19/2009
great chapter! pls update!
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 4 . 2/5/2009
lovedlovedloved it

cant wait for more!

hope you update soon!

-ifly*hugs*
Thaddeus Grey chapter 4 . 2/5/2009
Moar. I must have MOAR.
artsysmiles chapter 2 . 1/16/2009
i like this. it's really good, and i am slightly dissapointed that the minute i decide to start reading this that you decide to not update.

I WANT TO KNOW THE ANGEL GUY'S NAME!
artsysmiles chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
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nice one

i swear i'll leave a longer review on the next chapter

update!
artificial destiny chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
i think i forgot to review this chapter.

i personally love reviews. they motivate me to write more.

so i'll give you as many as possible. pls update!
artificial destiny chapter 3 . 10/22/2008
ahh its reallyreally good

pls update!

thank youu

-artificial destiny
artificial destiny chapter 2 . 10/22/2008
this is really good :)
Rynx chapter 3 . 10/16/2008
Cute story! XD!
Link Broken chapter 3 . 10/12/2008
It was really good

near the beggining you said that she kept getting flashes of images, but all you specify is the dream.

Also, i think you should have had her distinguish that the images and emotions weren't just her imagination. Just like a sentence about it or something

I also noticed how at first the girls refered to the angel as "it" and then after Amelia touched his hand they refered to him as "He" I'm not sure if that was on purpose or not, but that was really good!

cant wait for more!
Link Broken chapter 2 . 10/12/2008
so good! So Good! SO GOOD! love it love it love it!
Link Broken chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
That was gr8! trying to type fast to go read the next chapter! I really liked that a lot. I loved the transition from scene to scene. It was fast, but paced. REALLY GOOD!
writer-in-progress101 chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
I love this keep it up!
ValSilph chapter 2 . 10/7/2008
Ooh, very interesting! I'm loving this story.

Also, thanks a ton for specifying that it takes place in the 1880's. I was under the impression it was modern XD
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