|Reviews for I Smile|
| Subbie chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
Wow. I can feel the emotion, it's really good. How old are you? Jw...
And you respect me? ... whoa...
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
I don't like the haiku format. You have 5-7-7-5-7-5. That doesn't seem to make sense. I like the idea behind the piece, the hinting at abortion, but not actually saying it. It's also really sweet. I do kind of wish there was a bit more of emotion in here, but still it's a nice piece.
PS If you're bored check out the Review Game forum and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile).
| Eve's Deception chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
this is precious and all too delicate.
its written so frankly its almost crude-
but its only sweet and lasting. i really like it.
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
Glad you changed your mind _ cute poem